Hi Tylah its Bella from Paroa school, I really like how you added heaps of really funny bits in it. I did a speech but it definetly wasn't as good as this one. To Be BTB you could maybe add more capitals.
Hi Tylah I loved your writing because I love when you said "non coffee drinker we are all going to die" that was the funniest bit. I think you should have won the speech competition.
Hi Tylah its Bella from Paroa school,
ReplyDeleteI really like how you added heaps of really funny bits in it. I did a speech but it definetly wasn't as good as this one. To Be BTB you could maybe add more capitals.
Hi Tylah I loved your writing because I love when you said "non coffee drinker we are all going to die" that was the funniest bit. I think you should have won the speech competition.
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