Wednesday, 25 September 2019

speech

WALT: write a speech A couple of weeks ago I wrote a speech hope u enjoy

2 comments:

  1. Hi Tylah its Bella from Paroa school,
    I really like how you added heaps of really funny bits in it. I did a speech but it definetly wasn't as good as this one. To Be BTB you could maybe add more capitals.

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  2. Hi Tylah I loved your writing because I love when you said "non coffee drinker we are all going to die" that was the funniest bit. I think you should have won the speech competition.

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