Thursday, 15 June 2017

lightning

Walt using similes to for show not tell I enjoyed making the video I found it challenging copy and pasting out of my plan and the turn it in a story

1 comment:

  1. Hi Tylah
    I love how you used really good similes.
    To be BTB maybe change your music next time.

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